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True worship in His presence

 5 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

I think this song would sound much better with less vocoder vocal effects and more pure voice. A little vocal effects on certain lyrics would be nice, but having vocal effects throughout the entire song makes the song sound too robotic. Like a robot is singing instead of a human. I love the song's intention and I love the lyrics as well, but my most negative thing is too much vocal effects. Too much. The music is pretty good, but it's quality could be improved, slightly. Keep up the good work.


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  19
 

Excellent use of Autotune. The effect is subtle enough to not totally change the character of the vocalist's voice.

This is an excellent theme, and I agree with you whole heartedly. The lyrics are very good and the instrumentation and vocals really support the theme very well.

The vocal harmonies are excellent and sound really full and balances.

This is a GREAT track.


 Comment Written 13-Feb-2016


Comment by
Jimmie Lee
 
 

I think this song would sound much better with less vocoder vocal effects and more pure voice. A little vocal effects on certain lyrics would be nice, but having vocal effects throughout the entire song makes the song sound too robotic. Like a robot is singing instead of a human. I love the song's intention and I love the lyrics as well, but my most negative thing is too much vocal effects. Too much. The music is pretty good, but it's quality could be improved, slightly. Keep up the good work.


 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013



reply by the artist on 05-Sep-2013
    Nice one. I really appreciate this. I would work on it. Thanks so much Jimmie.
Comment by
samandlancelot
 
 

Byno David,

Though I see the troubles
I don't care cos I have a Father (I'm thinking you see your own troubles, but you have a Father that makes your troubles seem light. But this could also refer to the troubles of the world. In that case, "I don't care" would not fit the rest of your lyrics. I care about the world's troubles, and I care about my own. But I have a Father in heaven who gives me peace and makes me okay even when I have troubles.)

A Father who was and is to come (my favorite line)

Very soothing music and lyrics.

Patricia


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the artist on 20-Jul-2013
    Wow.... This correction is awesome. I just read deeply into it. I would ammend that lyrics while working on other songs. Thank you very much Patricia. I appreciate this a lot.

reply by samandlancelot on 20-Jul-2013
    I'm so glad I was able to help. Thanks for letting me know.

    Patricia

reply by the artist on 20-Jul-2013
    Sure. You gave me an insight and a brand new concept of dealing with lyrics. Thank you again.
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

it's true that your kind of gospel music takes it to another level and it sounds great right from the beginning and you sing equally well;i wish you the best


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the artist on 20-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much Frankie(nash)
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