I really like this song love, please don't judge the rating as a negative. See it as a need to get it done type thing. Because I believe you have a nice voice that is being suppressed by it's owner and I feel if i don't get your attention you may leave this as is. You can make this so much stronger and show who you really are. The lyrics are simply beautiful love, your writing is a refreshing breeze, let you vocals show that you can complete that sensation. You're sooooooo very very close. Focus is the keep to each bridge and controlled breaths are the keys to controlled flows. Cheers love and good luck.. Ps we all have our unconfident moments, but to record without true confidence dilutes your composition. So feel it, belive and you will do it. Just flow and god shall hold your hand thru. Cheers
Wow. you make a lot of music!! I must have reviewed about 6 of your tracks now. As usual the piano playing is very nice. I would say that you might want to find ways of making your voice sound different in each track, maybe some voice effects?