The music is rather haunting with the piano melody line. This sounds really good over the drums. The rap fits nicely into the piano progression. The vocal effect in parts really makes the part stand out of the mix more.
The track might benefit from a change in the progression.
On balance this has a lot of potential, however it was rather on the repetitious side for my taste. It needs something else in the way of a complete chord change in the backing, maybe even a general change in pace, to break it up and add some contrasting interest. Very good work though, keep it up and never lose site of your goals.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the artist on 01-Jun-2013
THANK YOU FOR BEING HONEST, I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU TAKING THE TIME TO LISTEN TO IT THOUGH, GOD BLESS