You certainly can write songs!
Very nice voice. The feel of the song is very uplifting. My only complaint is that the recording sounding too much like a recording if that makes sense. The lyrics sounded somewhat choppy, and I didn't really get to hear all the words. Still lovely song that pulled me from the start!
You play lovely btw if I haven't stated that prior to now. I think I see what's another pointer to inject, just play the melody on a recorded track. Then record your vocals, because they need more focus and attention, because you have a lovely sound and you can truly elevate it to the NEXT NEXT level if only you could diversify the two. BTW I was shocked to hear a key slip, your dag near flawless on those keys..better that me might i say :} I really really like this song. it makes me fly on those wings as well
Very nice voice. The feel of the song is very uplifting. My only complaint is that the recording sounding too much like a recording if that makes sense. The lyrics sounded somewhat choppy, and I didn't really get to hear all the words.
Comment Written 08-May-2013
reply by the artist on 18-May-2013
Thanks for listening and for your comments. At the time I did not have much to work with. This was from my first CD which was extremely minimal. I used a Kurzweil and created my own mixes on it for the songs.
This is my second song from this artist to review today. You must be quite prolific at writing your tunes. You should play in bluesy bars while people are drinking wine. I liked the song.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the artist on 05-May-2013
Thank you for your kind words. I have been writing these songs since 1990. In 1998 I wrote quite of few of these as I had a rough year that year and found closure in writing. Thank you again for listening.