Well well well Mr. Francis Lee it looks like you gonna show all the skill and just as you should. That was some good string play there mate, i was feeling that.. it was so good it made me just want to hear that. The vocals were ok but I think you can do better because the others sound more confident. But you did loosen up mid song.. But that opening verse for the 1st 5 lines seem to be stagid and broken in power and confidence. but this song is a nice composition. I think you got to hard on them at them mid down point. I feel the passion and intent though.. The strings just still need that extra little love as you rip them. I know you know this.. so I'm dropping it as a reminder. Cheers mate
The song is nice, notwithstanding the that the guitar is a bit louder than your voice. Again, it is not easy singing and playing. The lyric and the tune is has potential. And you were well-timed and disciplined while singing it.
Allow someone else to help you work on the audio balancing next time.
It is a 5 star for me because your song has POTENTIALS is instrumentation is fully utilized!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
reply by the artist on 23-Mar-2013
Thank you again for good criticism. I am still working on getting the right mix but am still new to recording. I do a much better live performance.