This is reminiscent of some of the Beatles work from some of their later recordings before the breakup. The progression is good and the vocal melody has an interesting sound. THe leads have a sort of Harrison like quality.
The recording might have been a bit better but the idea still sounds good.
I like the blues style this track has. The guitars are played well, but they seem to be so loose in the performance. It's a rough recording with your vocal so far back in the mix that without the lyrics I really could not hear anything you were singing. Overall I am a lover of the blues, and the song has a deep tradition to it. Very good.