Very nice progression with changes that flow well. The vocal is very interesting and the timbre is unique and memorable. The Acoustic performance is good and the chords are well voiced to fit with the vocal.
Posting the lyrics along with your work always helps make sure your meaning comes across well.
I think it's great you honor our people who have served. This is just such a garage mix. Why don't you post lyrics? Your voice is so drowned out in effects, and so far back in the mix there is no chance of hearing a word you say. The guitar sounds pretty good. Overall it's a great effort.
The song is excellent. Your guitar playing is amazing. The problem is the recording is so bad of a quality I can't understand what you are singing. I would love to hear more of your music with a better recording.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2013
reply by the artist on 31-Jan-2013
I'll be posting another tune next week. The next one is a digital recording, it is much clearer. My wife just told me I should make a digital recording of Pearl Harbor Day. I probably will.