Very nice progression with changes that flow well. The vocal is very interesting and the timbre is unique and memorable. The Acoustic performance is good and the chords are well voiced to fit with the vocal.
Posting the lyrics along with your work always helps make sure your meaning comes across well.
I think it's great you honor our people who have served. This is just such a garage mix. Why don't you post lyrics? Your voice is so drowned out in effects, and so far back in the mix there is no chance of hearing a word you say. The guitar sounds pretty good. Overall it's a great effort.
Another 5 stars.This is a very innocent sounding track.It also sounds like it should be sung in a concert hall to 40,000 people.Stellar vox track again.Sing it dude.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the artist on 05-Feb-2013
Thank you Auriemma. I think we'll get along just fine. You are the first rock musician I have come across on here that sounds like rock.
The song is excellent. Your guitar playing is amazing. The problem is the recording is so bad of a quality I can't understand what you are singing. I would love to hear more of your music with a better recording.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2013
reply by the artist on 31-Jan-2013
I'll be posting another tune next week. The next one is a digital recording, it is much clearer. My wife just told me I should make a digital recording of Pearl Harbor Day. I probably will.
The music was quite melodic on this piece. I would really like to hear the vocals out front a little more on this as I think we may have missed the whole experience. Great work!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the artist on 28-Jan-2013
Thank You. I recorded that about 5 years ago singing in front of a security camera. I know that is very primitive, but at the time it was the best method I had.