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 18 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

Your best song that I have heard so far!

I liked the melody and instrumentation....the timing was great...the minor starts and stops....

I liked the way the keyboard threaded around the hook....you could have added an instrumental break as it appeared you were going to do.

Anyway, really good song!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2017



reply by the artist on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you very much
Comment by
sowjimusic2
 
Music Rating
 
 

Hi sir, very nice lyrics and u moved song flexible, very nice voice, in future I m expecting more songs from u soon, super sir keep rocking always, all the best for ur bright future


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016



reply by the artist on 11-Mar-2016
    thank you very much
Comment by
TENX
 
Music Rating
 
 

Excellent vibe, good lyrics. It's got a very uplifting Reggae sound. But kept simple, not cluttered. Nice keyboard sound and beats, very compact to deliver and carry the message. Best wishes and good luck with all!


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016



reply by the artist on 30-Jan-2016
    I very much appreciate,I will do the very best of trying to improve
Comment by
songwriter47
Premier Artist
 
Music Rating
 
 

Hi,

Love the Reggae vibe ... good accent for it! And yep, who you hang with can make a big difference in your life. styill smiling!

Alan


 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015



reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate

reply by songwriter47 on 27-Feb-2016
    You are welcome. I apologize for the very late reply. I;ve been in and out of the hospital due to cancer issues. This is the first time I've logged onto the site in over a month. That's a really great song!

    Alan

reply by the artist on 29-Feb-2016
    I wish you great health

reply by songwriter47 on 29-Feb-2016
    Thank you!

reply by songwriter47 on 11-Mar-2016
    Thank you for the well wishes ... much appreciated!
Comment by
AugustWillDecay
 
 

I agree man you always have to surround yourself with the right people no matter what you are doing in life. Good people can make life great while the wrong people can really mess things up for us.

GOOD SONG!

-august will decay
9-25-2015


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 26-Sep-2015
    thank you ,I appreciate your review

reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  19
 

Love the reggae feel. The singer's rendering is excellent for the style of music and serves to further enhance the originality of the style. Good track.

I would think about using a little vocal processing like maybe auto tune at the end.


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 19-Aug-2015
    thank you very much;your suggestion might help a lot

reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate
Comment by
Kakalaki Kid
 
 

This one is hard to judge because you have moments where this song is dead on, but then there are moments that it is unstructured. But i'm sure you can hear this for yourself. I personally like the originality of it and the creativity of it. The vocals need more structure to fill them out, not just in the hook. But your on track mate. I'm a fan mate. FYI I would work with ya. But oddly enough you're a top reviewer and yet I have yet to receive a review from you mate. Odd aah


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 14-Aug-2015
    thank you very much;your sincere might go a long way to make be get better

reply by Kakalaki Kid on 14-Aug-2015
    I know you have it in you & your range of skill sets to be something uniquely grand. You just have to never ever settle for less within ones own self. Achieve you greatness through your own self awareness. Realize your flaws and make then techniques, realize your weaknesses and make them masterful. I found my own within it's own an it makes me proud to be the vessel I can be. Music is a powerful think..but most of all it is beauty in its purest untouched essence. Find your essence and embrace it with all of your might and when you master you.. it won't matter what we say.. you'll know that you are IT mate.. and for you i say cheers because I remember the beginning like it was yesterday and i know you are in for a jealous love that can never be match only by the pain of heart break and loneliness it can accompany itself with. Be a Master of your craft, not a servant to it's masses. I pray this lifts you even higher to the point where you can truly see. and if you need me mate..I'm here anytime bloody where for bloody free mate free. i don't charge for knowledge, if it's wanted then it shall be given to the best of my ability and those amongst me. Hope to hear from you soon.

reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate
Comment by
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
 
 

Hello Frankie. I wanted to come over, say hello and thank you for the review and return one to you.
I loved your music and your message is clear. Nice work, my best to you.
Loyd


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015



reply by the artist on 10-Apr-2015
    I really appreciate,it inspires to get better,thank you very much

reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate
Comment by
Dustybones
 
 

Frankie, This song has all the right stuff with the Hook, timing,and beat. However I think you can record the vocal with more soul. I wish I could give you how to do just that. Vocals are the key to music, and will make or break you. I'm not saying I can sing.

Someone gave me a review, saying to sing as if I was singing to someone or giving a stage performace. I learned from that and redid my whole song, Drifting Snow, from top to the very bottom. You have a fabulous tune, try singing with movement and more feelings. If not for the FanMusic, then work on that when you practice any and all you songs. Try a backup vocal.

May happiness be with you, my friend!


 Comment Written 23-Feb-2015



reply by the artist on 23-Feb-2015
    I love to hear such a great review that helps me to get better;i really appreciate;My real talent is to dance and make the earth shake and I thought it better to compose and sing my songs especially since I wasn't getting anybody to sing it for me(so I DIY)

reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate
Comment by
Jun Naotsuka
 
 

I actually like this. I like the lyrics too though I listened to the music first and read the lyrics afterwards. It has some Bob Marley like quality to it. That's right. Don't let nobody tell you you can't do it!


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2014



reply by the artist on 28-Nov-2014
    thank you very much,you made feel good and i will try to make it better in the future

reply by the artist on 06-Jan-2016
    thank you ,I appreciate
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