This can often be a situation that any of us can find our selves in...you did great job of sharing that in your song. I liked the short stops.
Good job the way the percussion/bass followed the melody. Vocals were very clear and not over ridden by the instruments; in fact, I would have sound engineer separate the other instruments in the mix so they could be heard more clearly.
I really like this song. I played it a couple of times. One thing that stands out to me is that you hit a good range of octaves, singing highs and lows. The vocals was good, it was a great beat, great guitar behind the beat. I was really feeling the lyrics because I can definitely relate to this song.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the artist on 22-Mar-2016
you made my day and made feel good;I will try to improve,thank you very much
I would not put this in any Genre, let it flow free. But if any it could sit nicely in alternative, island, and blues/jazz quite lovely. Any other genre would just be an unaccepting field of openness, and yet total closure to anything original.
Good track, very original and well composed.
i loved this tune too but singing again needs a lot more than what it is buddy, no offence pls, but i luv your compositions and the lyrics are pretty straight and very easy to understand and capture. good and keep it up my friend. all the best:) cheers...
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the artist on 18-Aug-2014
i really appreciate your review;keeping it real like that help me to improve;thank you very much