The lyrics sound OK but I would like to see them published so as to better understand the story you are telling, however it sounds like they could probably have been developed a bit more to complete the story.
Musically this is appealing with an interesting rhythm and instrumentation.
original vocal,light atmosphere,but i think that some ambiental supporting sounds that supplement vocal are needed for song to reach deeper depth.vocal is ok but if you focus all time on it ,it becomes monotonous.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the artist on 19-Oct-2012
thank you so much,your review and advice will help very much
Love the lightness of this song. The backing is very original and minimal, in fact it always disappears at one part. Good instrument choice make it a fun listen. "I like it and I like it and I feel it and I feel it" very catchy.
It's bordering on a rap because there's not a lot of movement in the melody but still a good listen