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Reviews from
(That Girl)

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 18 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

This had catchy beat and theme. I particularly liked the bass line.
I would have added more instrumentation behind the "chorus" That Girl is So fine.

This song with a little work could be a really special song.

Add a middle wight to break up the melody and that will make the listener long to hear the chorus.

Good job!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2017



reply by the artist on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you very much for your great review;it shows me that you are very knowledgeable in music
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  9
 

The acoustic guitar intro is nice.

The lyrics sound OK but I would like to see them published so as to better understand the story you are telling, however it sounds like they could probably have been developed a bit more to complete the story.

Musically this is appealing with an interesting rhythm and instrumentation.


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2016



reply by the artist on 16-Feb-2016
    you are right
Comment by
AugustWillDecay
 
 

Really cool song man nice groove very catchy! I really like the intro and the sound you are using. cool lyrics too.

-August Will Decay


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 12-Sep-2015
    thank you very much,I appreciate your review
Comment by
Kakalaki Kid
 
 

The lyrics are not the problem mate, i think it's the vocal intro to this track that needs attention and your vocal fade downs. But your style is cool as heck mate. i'm jamming


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 14-Aug-2015
    thank you,you are great and it's my pleasure to read your comments
Comment by
Edward Schaffer
 
 

What is wrong with the vocal here? You defeat the instruments in the background instead of working with them; the piano and deums... Pleas re record with a better vocal effort.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015



reply by the artist on 03-Jan-2015
    thank you for your advice;it's well taken
Comment by
lcmmusikproductions
 
 

This is a wonderfully composed remix-style song. It almost sounds of a reggae or reggae tone genre. Very different. Everything from the background beats to the vocals and tempo. a definite hit.


 Comment Written 18-Feb-2013



reply by the artist on 21-Feb-2013
    thank yo u so much,i appreciate
Comment by
stanj3
 
Music Rating
 
 

I really dig this song, great reggae feel good music and your vocals have a great sound along with much emotion. This is a hit song, 5 stars


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the artist on 15-Nov-2012
    thank you again,i appreciate
Comment by
vanirof
 
 

original vocal,light atmosphere,but i think that some ambiental supporting sounds that supplement vocal are needed for song to reach deeper depth.vocal is ok but if you focus all time on it ,it becomes monotonous.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2012



reply by the artist on 19-Oct-2012
    thank you so much,your review and advice will help very much
Comment by
Jillianne
 
 

Love the lightness of this song. The backing is very original and minimal, in fact it always disappears at one part. Good instrument choice make it a fun listen. "I like it and I like it and I feel it and I feel it" very catchy.

It's bordering on a rap because there's not a lot of movement in the melody but still a good listen


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2012



reply by the artist on 21-Sep-2012
    thank you very much,you made me feel good
Comment by
coronel
 
Music Rating
 
 

I like the beat. Your base hooks are also great. You can readily expand your song could become a good club song. Similar to sean kingston featuring in a j beaver song.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2012



reply by the artist on 20-Sep-2012
    thank you very much,you made me feel good
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