Impressive keys on this one, and a very PinkFloyd-like feel. The rhythm guitar has a great affect on the harmony, but I would bring it up a touch as it seems to get lost a bit in the background. the vocals are very well done and sound very professional. Good job!
Like the music and the lyrics, but I am not finding your type of voice suitable for the rock oriented sound of this song. I always give an 'A' for effort though:) Adjustment needed, IMHO: the vocalist.
Very well recorded and performed. The song started very differently to the general feel of the song. Maybe keep the keys going for a while during the 1st verse. The mix isn't bad at all. If I had to change something I would bring the lead vocal up ever so slightly. Very good though. Just about ready for radio.