The opening keyboard line is very good, it makes a great intro. The music is nicely arranged and has a full, fat sound. The rap is very good, rhythmic and the singers inflection helps give the story meaning. THE Autotuned voice is nicely used and the effect works well in this song.
Okay I gave it three songs and it appears that autotune is your thang so Imma just ignore that in my reviews. But The verse itself sounds kind of simple, put some swagger on it. if this is a bounce track, then make us bounce. Not just with the beat and hook. Use your verse to stick out and say this is me and this is my time. Strive to stick out..or blend. Up to you mate. Good luck