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Forgive me Lord

This is our redemption slow song with improvements

 16 total reviews 
Comment by
emoney
 
Music Rating
  Rank:  101
 

I love the music,would like to here a lil more highs on the vocals,ok now i here it,maybe same clearity as the vocal get stronger and clearer on the break and towords the end would like to hear eaqual strength throughout the song, all else appears to be perfect.

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 31-Mar-2012
    ok thanks dude, yeah well try to adjust it.
Comment by
trevriffic
 
 

Again another track worthy of a radio release. You should enter this one also in a contest and on ourstage.com also. 5 big fat shiny stars. I still think you guys are getting close to a good mic sound but I wish I was there in the studio Id set the delay a tad different but its just me of course.


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 31-Mar-2012
    i wish you were here to help us dude. your vocals sound great and yeah we could put down the echo a bit. thanks a lot for the good feedback bro and merry christmas!
Comment by
ToneKuiper
 
 

It "took me right away" to where I'm sure you'd like this song to bring people. Moved my heart really to hear the sincerity and humility in your plea, knowing we are all too blocked by our own common pride. The performance was right on: timing, sweet feminine voice, really exceptional backup vocals (tones/what they did musically too with timing, etc), beautiful piano. Great song to be very proud of!


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 31-Mar-2012
    Thank you very much my friend. really appreciate it.
Comment by
gregryan
 
 

This is much better than it was! Love the harmonies so much! Was unexpected and really brilliant. Can't think of too many more improvements1 Nice job!


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 30-Mar-2012
    Thanks greg, it means a lot coming from a great musician such as yourself. very much appreciated.
Comment by
Rob Rideout
 
Review Stars
 
 

Beautiful piano intro leading into a good vocal with sweet harmonies. I like the space between the verses. The singing is soulful & fitting for this gospel piece. The drums sound a bit fake somehow, but it may just be the recording.


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 30-Mar-2012
    thanks rob
Comment by
Eon Mallett
 
 

Sweet Stuff. Vocals are good, lyrics are awesome. Love the Melody, as I am a big RnB Fan And If this were not a gospel song it would fall in that Category. Excellent Stuff

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 30-Mar-2012
    wow, thanks dude. really appreciate it
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