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Forgive me Lord

This is our redemption slow song with improvements

 16 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
Music Rating
 
 

#1 Ranked Reviewer!

To me, a religious song is perfect for asking the forgiveness. High pitch and exact tempo all are excellent. Nice song.


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

This track is GREAT! It couldn't be better. The vocals are SUPERB. The music is excellent and in my opinion, at this point would be very difficult to improve on.

I wish there wasn't the limit on the six star ratings cause I an out, but this track deserves 6++.

SUPERB WORK!!


 Comment Written 13-Feb-2016


Comment by
Havoc
 
 

Put together catchy. Like the vocal in the music. Curious about its change over the melody and subordinate structure.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012



reply by the artist on 07-May-2013
    thank u so much for your comments. actually it was done by another band member who's not here so cant really comment on what she did but glad to hear from you.
Comment by
pro V tein
 
 

To me, a religious song is perfect for asking the forgiveness. High pitch and exact tempo all are excellent. Nice song.


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2012



reply by the artist on 13-Sep-2012
    cool thanks so much
Comment by
Karen Seaton
 
 

Beautiful song and great voices. you will definitely reach places keep up the good work!!! God Bless!!!


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2012



reply by the artist on 23-Apr-2012
    thank you very very kindly mam!
Comment by
String Base
 
 

Bright and brilliant beats following the music. I like all the elements added in to the music. Very pleasing to the ears especially the singing expressions.


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012



reply by the artist on 06-Apr-2012
    thank you
Comment by
briangrant
 
Music Rating
 
 

This is a great song and great performance. Recording quality and vocals were awesome. I don't have any ideas to make it better-I think it is great the way it is now. Keep it up!!


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2012



reply by the artist on 01-Apr-2012
    thanks alot dude
Comment by
Frankie(n)
 
Music Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  2
 

#2 Ranked Reviewer

great song.it was so melodious,and the rhythm was cool,however when you started,i'm not too sure if your voice was coming out or you were relaxing


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 31-Mar-2012
    Thanks Nash, i dont know what helena was doing but glad you liked it, lol.
Comment by
Lady moosS
 
 

Love the piano! Love the voice! Beautiful slow song. Waited in anticipation for the drums. Personally, I think this could have been a nice love song. Love the bells. Love the drums, finally. Not fond of the words, but that is a personal thing. Good song. :-)


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 31-Mar-2012
    ok thanks!
Comment by
Tanis York
 
Music Rating
  Rank:  97
 

awesome tune. your hard work really shows in this take. there are only a few suggestions just to try out. pull the drums and bass down a tad in the mix when it comes in. and maybe a slight delay or verb in the voice or a backup track. overall excellently composed song good freakin work!!


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 31-Mar-2012
    really, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the advice.
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