Really nice progression, and the synth patch at the beginning is very interesting. Your rhythmic accents are interesting and pleasing. The vocal sounds good and the effect is good. The harmonies are really good.
Stevie Wonder on harmonica... with smooth R&B mixed with rap... and then you get reggae in he chorus... then that non-English language - sounds... Aborigine... so you are good in several genres, and you mix them all... and if you do enough of them you'll create your own genre... nice backing vocals... not studio equipment, so a pro would have to take it further... your voice and the harmonies are radio-grade, so this piece could make it, if... if it has that 'magic', and you just missed...! Try it again with more variations in dynamics... and slight tempo changes... (which means you'll have to do live instruments rather than synthesized)...
Comment Written 23-Mar-2012
reply by the artist on 23-Mar-2012
yeah true, We have really crappy recording equipment and the truth is that this particular studio cant do live music recordings to the quality we want it to be but we'll keep trying. thanks for the comments.