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A song about the responsibility to our children .

 15 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
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#1 Ranked Reviewer!

You are a very good story teller. The lyrics are well written and tell a "life" story that is interesting and extremely well presented in your vocal styling. The timbre and range of your voice is very good.

The progression is excellent and the changes flow nicely and maintained my interest level.

Very nicely written.


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
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  Rank:  16
 

You are a very good story teller. The lyrics are well written and tell a "life" story that is interesting and extremely well presented in your vocal styling. The timbre and range of your voice is very good.

The progression is excellent and the changes flow nicely and maintained my interest level.

Very nicely written.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016


Comment by
Kakalaki Kid
 
 

I just want to say this and then move on to your next song..k?..
Okay.. this is a HIT and I LOVE THIS TRACK> great lyrics, vocals style This is cool mate..My type of groove all day


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015


Comment by
Pubby
 
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A nice, clean song - the guitar was all that was needed to carry the vocals, though a bit hushed. It reminded me early on of Blue Rodeo - with the lyrics dictating the medley. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 17-Mar-2012
    Thanks for the complement and thanks for taking the time to listen
Comment by
25microns
 
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Nice acoustic beginning.i read through the lyrics, which are clearly sang.
Needs different level to pull it all together.
In all not a bad song.hope to hear some more of your music.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 17-Mar-2012
    Thanks for the feedback and thanks for listening
Comment by
eddiebears
 
 

A great lesson is told in the lyrics of this song and it is told with passion and emotion. The vocals and guitar was also well done - soft and smooth. I like this song a very much!


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 16-Mar-2012
    thanks for the kind words and thanks for listening to my music. eddie
Comment by
MichiganLyricist
 
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Great song,, very good story, awesome demo. This is the first song I gave 5 stars to. Great job. Keep up the good work.

PS. if u collab. pm me.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 16-Mar-2012
    Thanks for the kind words, and thanks for the generous review Please listen to my other posts, my recordings skills aren't great but I hope my songs and lyrics inspire others. thanks again
Comment by
nomi338
 
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I love the lyrics and they message they convey. The song is definitely easy on the ears and inspiring as well. Your transitions seem natural and unforced so with all things considered, I think this is an excellent work.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 16-Mar-2012
    thanks for the kind words and thanks for listening
Comment by
Caeric il produttore
 
 

OK, first the good:

Solid lyric, well sung and really nice self harmonies.

Critiques:

The song starts WAY too slow and kind of crawls along. This could be a much grittier piece if you uptempo'd just a little bit. Also, you can barely hear the guitar. If you get a chance to re-record this, plug in or mic it up :) Thanks for sharing.

Il Produttore - My $.02


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 16-Mar-2012
    THanks for the feedback, I seem to be having a hard time with volume levels. when i listen to the track on garageband it sounds fine, but when i convert it to mp3 the whole track just loses its gain. I will try to fix it . thanks for your honesty.
Comment by
sweetchilli5
 
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Hi Rondo . Let me start by saying that you have a beautiful song there on the tough subject of parenthood. Thought the acoustic approach was great.

My critique would be though to use the vocal chorus effect sparingly.

When you sang the words "Born in a small town", you sounded perfect but when effect added just after with "a simple man with simple ways" I thought it took from the voice slightly.

Overall, very good song. Well done.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012



reply by the artist on 16-Mar-2012
    I went back and listened to it again and your absolutely right. thanks for the feedback and your honest review its appreciated.
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