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babe stop pretending

a lady who enjoys her guy's loving but pretends

 29 total reviews 
Comment by
Jimi Seven
 
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#1 Ranked Reviewer!

Rhythmically the song is driven....but I didn't find it appealing...the baby, stop pretending was not melodic enough for me...
Unfortunately, after the first 45 secs I did not need to hear more as it was more of the same.
On songs like this I would focus on bringing more melody and less repetition.
On the good side I can hear your passion in wanting to perform and I applaud that but would continue ti work on the art of songwriting.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2017



reply by the artist on 03-Aug-2017
    thank you very much,advice will help a lot to get me better
Comment by
sowjimusic2
 
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Mind blowing performance sir, really amazing can't stop appreciating u, very good voice culture, all the best sir, expecting similar music type from u, keep rocking sir
drums sound is super ,continue stop pretending u used in song i lke it.


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016



reply by the artist on 14-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much,I appreciate your review
Comment by
Noah_Ohne
 
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  Rank:  16
 

The acoustic guitar intro is nice.

The lyrics sound OK but I would like to see them published so as to better understand the story you are telling, however it sounds like they could probably have been developed a bit more to complete the story.

Musically this is appealing with an interesting rhythm and instrumentation. Is it me, or is this a remix of (That Girl) with slightly different instrumentation?


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2016



reply by the artist on 16-Feb-2016
    I perfectly agree with you,after listening to it I tried to make changes but unfortunately,the data is lost,thank you very much for reviewing

reply by the artist on 16-Feb-2016
    I perfectly agree with you,after listening to it I tried to make changes but unfortunately,the data is lost,thank you very much for reviewing
Comment by
AugustWillDecay
 
 

Cool song man, I think we can all relate to those lyrics. I like your sound and style, your vocals are sometimes shaky don't know if that's intentional, sounds pretty good maybe work on smoothing out the vocals?

-A U G U S T W I L L D E C A Y
(9-14-2015)


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2015



reply by the artist on 19-Sep-2015
    tank you very much,your comment might help a lot
Comment by
Kakalaki Kid
 
 

This is a really cool style, not use to it at all but could get use to it. The hook was a little to much at the end without any variation. But i get it. Cheers mate


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015



reply by the artist on 14-Aug-2015
    you are right and I am trying to get the musicfile which I lost so that I could redo it

reply by Kakalaki Kid on 14-Aug-2015
    That's is the sign of a true artist. I applaud you and thx for the share. Learning is the only thing that hinders the mind and skill. Next to stage fright this can be a career killer. You are off to a great start in all young man. Cheers and keep in touch
Comment by
MysticalBaxter
 
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ooh it has such a upbeat music i just want to bounce up and down in my seat!! lol its pretty catchy to


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015



reply by the artist on 14-Mar-2015
    thank you,i appreciate
Comment by
Kenson
 
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That was very awesome man i really like it keep doing your thing i hope you get where you deserve to be keep it up


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014



reply by the artist on 10-Feb-2014
    thank you very much,i appreciate
Comment by
Ali star
 
 

Some parts way to repetative needs a bit of evening out
I like the scream after the "till you scream" lyric that is creative
Good


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014



reply by the artist on 10-Feb-2014
    thank you very much,your suggestion is very helpful and well noted
Comment by
Ionut Mirel Udrea
 
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Hi! This is not bad! You can do more with the sound. The instrumental arrangements need some balance! Also you need to do a better vocal interpretation!


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014



reply by the artist on 10-Feb-2014
    thank you very much,your review will help a lot
Comment by
Scott Harvey
 
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Nice lively/quirky song. It definitely brings a smile to my face. I think the song would have been enhanced a little with a funky bass. But it's a nice/fun song.


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014



reply by the artist on 10-Feb-2014
    thank you very much ;your suggestion is very helpful and well noted
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