Contact Us            Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login


Contests

Is that the Beatles?
Deadline: Today!

Techno Music Contest
Deadline: Today!

Acoustic Contest
Deadline: In 5 Days

Story Songs Music Competition
Deadline: In 6 Days

Heartbreak Music Contest
Deadline: Nov. 29th





Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
traditional country tear ballad
Pit Of Sorrow by stanj3
 Category:  Country Music
  Posted: October 29, 2012      Views: 174

Lyrics
Like a hot pit of sorrow
My soul is on fire
For the one who won't know me
Or feel my desire
Still I tell myself lonely
Is only in mind
But the pictures inside me
Are of the lonely kind

And the candles cold flame
Doesn't burn quite the same
Broken glass of my mirror
Why won't she feel the pain
All the flowers she returned
Send a message to me
That I no longer can be
Making her memories

One broken song
And love is gone gone gone
Tears that you buy
Makes you cr cr cr cry

I know her falling from love
Has sent me to this hell
I can't see Heaven above
From my heartbroken cell
Still I tell myself one day
That she may return
And in this pit of sorrow
I will no longer burn
View Reviews Save to Favorites Promote This
Upgrade Your Account!

  • Post More! - Two posts every day. Learn from the feedback that will be written on everything that you post.

  • Contests! - Enter music contests for free with your upgraded membership. Cash prizes!

  • Sales - Sell your music commission free.

  • SPECIAL OFFER - Bonuses when you upgrade including member dollars to promote your posts!

Get all the benefits! No restrictions

Click here for our instant upgrade

Share your own music! - Information on our membership.

Artist Notes
Tascam 4 track tape
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Share or Bookmark    
© Copyright 2015 stanj3 All rights reserved.
stanj3 has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.

You need to login or register to write reviews.

It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.

Interested in posting your own songs online? Click here to find out more.



Share a song. Get feedback for your music. Guaranteed reviews for your music and you will be ranked. Information.


  Contact Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement